Most of you know I've been working hard on releasing a new edition of The Pet Washer, sans my newbie errors! I have written several posts on my blunders in this blog. I'm here to say that nothing has taught me more about the publishing industry than just doing it. Reading books is not the same as creating books. It's like building a house. Have you ever remodeled or built a home? Well, you learn all about baseboards, doorknob styles, cabinet overlays, hardware finishes, and window styles and you will never stop noticing these details once you become aware of them.
Do I read the magazines when I'm in my friend's restroom? No. I appraise her baseboards--the width and style of them. I check out the hardware on her cabinets, and I notice if the tile guy made the most attractive cuts for the room. (Of course, I keep my observations to myself!) Having your eyes opened to construction details is half blessing, half curse!
The same thing has happened to me regarding book formatting. You all know I made the biggest rookie error of all time when I failed to justify the right alignment of my text in my first edition. I still shudder at the mistake. I have been reading my entire life, and I never thought about text alignment. Readers didn't complain, but to me, the error was unacceptable. I began to wonder what else I didn't know about book formatting--and it turns out, the list was long!
Without further ado, I'm going to list for you the things I've learned, done, and the things you can do, to make your paperback look more professional. I will include a sample of my book below. All of my suggestions are FREE to implement. I don't have hundreds to spend on book formatting software so I used Word to make my book look as professional as possible.
- Justify the right alignment of your text!
- The FIRST paragraph of each CHAPTER is NOT indented.
- Font matters! If you can't afford to buy fonts, use a bookmakers' font like Garamond (Word has a free version of it and it's BEAUTIFUL!). I updated my kindle version with Garamond as well.
- Adjust the font size in your paperback for your reader. I used 14 point because my readers are young and could possibly be intimidated by small print.
- Choose a stylish page number that matches your book's subject matter. I chose a whimsical page number for The Pet Washer. (Word has many choices).
- Don't number the first page of each NEW chapter (and certainly don't number your front matter and back matter--titles pages, About the Author etc.) I used Section Breaks after each chapter to keep the page number count consistent, but I selected "different first page" to remove the headers and footers for each new chapter page).
- Put your name and the name of your book on every numbered page in a header or a footer (I chose header). You can reduce the color to a soft black or gray. Why do this? It's fantastic marketing. I have read many books where I instantly forget the authors name--unless they pasted it on every stinkin' page. You'll see how it looks in my sample--and it's a common choice these days for publishers.
- Check your margins! They should not be too big or too small. No one wants to see words squished to the ends of the pages, and no one wants a sea of white space and a small rectangle of text either. The readers eye requires a comfortable amount of white space.
- Mind your gutter! Createspace, or whoever you use, won't put the gutter in for you. Margins and gutters are two different things. Take the time to format these two measurements until you're satisfied.
- Update your TOC! Every time you mess with your font size or margins, your page number count changes. Don't forget to update your Table of Contents with the new page numbers.
- Stylize your chapter headings! You have a lot of options when it comes to chapter headings, even in Word. I used a cute hyphen to set off my chapter titles like this ~The Princess~. You can change up the font or add a graphic. The key is to match the style to your content.
- Drop caps! The first line of the first paragraph is often stylized with a Drop Cap first letter, or the first few words are written entirely in caps. View my example to see how I chose to accent the first line of my chapters!
- Include a list of all the books you've written. I haven't published my other novels yet, so I didn't do this, but again, it's smart advertising. I would put this in the front matter.
- If the book is a series, include a blurb and/or an excerpt for the next book! I described book two, The Wishing Star, in my back matter. Readers have just completed The Pet Washer and what better time to mention The Wishing Star! It's not published yet, but I announced it as Coming Soon.
- Include your website address! I included the website for the Pet Washer series on the title page, and the website address for my blog is in the About the Author section.
- Include a photo only if it's a professional head shot--just my opinion. It can be artsy, but the quality needs to be professional. I did not include a photo in my About the Author section simply because I don't have one.
- Front matter! Should include the minimum of a title page, a copyright page, and a TOC. I also included a dedication page.
- Back matter! Should include the minimum of an About the Author and/or Acknowledgements page. I also included an announcement regarding book two.
- The cover! I believe books are judged by their covers. Of all things--pay for a professional cover (unless you have mad graphic design skills). The cover should be formatted to look good as a thumbnail image because bookstores rarely carry indie books. You can sell paperbacks all day long on Amazon--but it will be off your thumbnail image--just like the ebooks.I love the charm of my first cover, but it didn't display well as a thumbnail. The new cover, with the puppy, speaks more directly to my audience (ages 7 and up) and is a vibrant thumbnail image.
- Calculate the spine! You can't calculate your spine width until you have a final page count. Let your designer know this in advance. Don't accept completed files until all measurements are accounted for!
- Pricing! The longer your book, the more expensive it will be to print. If you have a 500 page book--you will be forced to charge your customers an arm and a leg for it and it may not be worth producing as a paperback. There are things you can do to reduce the page count, like shrinking margins, but don't sacrifice the beauty and symmetry of the pages. I chose a larger font for my readers, which means I'll make less profit per book--but their comfort is more important to me.
- Breaks within your chapters. Sometimes you end a scene or time goes by and you indicate a break in the novel, but it's not a new chapter. You can use asterisks, extra space between paragraphs, or graphics to indicate the break. In my first edition I used * * * . In my second edition, I used ~ ~ ~ to indicate a break or major scene change. Again, just keep your style consistent, but make a conscious choice about how you will handle these.
- Odd pages are always on the right side! Your page numbering should begin on an odd page on the right side of the book. Chapters can begin on odd or even pages. Some book stylists choose to begin every chapter on the right side, but that is not necessary.
- Blank pages. Sometimes they are necessary in front and back matter--but make sure no accidental ones appear in your book.
- Widows and Orphans! Avoid them at all costs (not human ones) pagination ones! Here's an article that explains: http://www.thebookdesigner.com/2010/10/pagination-styles-shall-we-kill-the-widows-orphans/
- LCCN! This is key--if you want a Library of Congress number, do not approve your Proof until you apply for one. Createspace sent in my application for $49.00. Once I receive my number, I will add it to my copyright page and then the new edition of The Pet Washer will be ready for publication! The LCCN is free, but I opted to pay Createspace because they handle the application, send in copies of the book, and it was one less thing to clutter my brain. Why get an LCCN--why not get one? Whenever I speak, I give my book to the school libraries. I'm also going to be approaching county libraries with the new edition. The librarians will appreciate having the number and it could make the difference between being accepted or not being accepted by the library system.
- Proofread! I highly recommend ordering a physical proof of your book before publishing. Nothing makes your errors stand out like seeing the book in print. Have your friends review it also. And I advocate for hiring a professional editor and/or proofreader to go over your text. Bottom line--once your beautiful book is in your readers' hands--it should be perfect!
- New Edition! If you have already published your book and flubbed it like I did--you can release a new edition and retire the original.
Use the "Look Inside" Feature on Amazon to view the choices I made with The Pet Washer! Check out my page numbers, my gutter spacing, the margins, the chapter headings and first paragraphs, and my name at the top of each page. As a physical book, all of these choices look 100% natural and professional.
My cover as a thumbnail! This is how small your book can appear online--it must pop! |
To Do: Don't take my word for it--go to the local library and study book formatting! It's fascinating and, if you're like me, you'll never look at books the same :)
~This is by no means a complete list of book formatting options--please leave a comment and let me know your ideas, blunders, and successes!
Thank you so much for this post! I am getting ready to publish my first book and was almost ready to send it off to Create Space for a proof. I thought I had read enough blog posts and studied enough book formatting web pages that I caught all of my newbie mistakes, but alas I did not.
ReplyDeleteYou just saved me a big headache! Thanks for all of the tips.
Some very good advice there, Jennifer. How many copies do you reckon you have to sell to cover all costs?
ReplyDeleteHi Dick and Anonymous! I'm glad you found some helpful tips!!
ReplyDeleteAs far as recouping costs...well, I spent around $180 on a professional proofreader. My friend did the cover in trade. I spent $49 on the LCCN, which is not necessary and $25 on Createspace's expanded distribution. I already own my own ISBN numbers. So the total was $254.
However, the cover and the proofreading both apply to the ebook version as well. So my ebook and paperback sales will go toward recouping expenses. I make different amounts on my sales depending if I'm selling from the trunk of my car, from Amazon, from the Createspace store, or from my ebook version--so I estimate I will have to sell around 85 books to recoup my costs.
However, it's a one time expense and the book will be in print forever--with the beautiful cover and the lack of errors in the text--so I think it's worth it! Also, I hope the quality will lead to more sales than if I skimped.
So that's how I see it! I was a frugal as possible, but some expenses shouldn't be ignored in my opinion.
Thanks for reading!!!
Well done!
DeleteI'm sticking to ebooks for the present, but if sales take off that's the way I'll go.
Good luck, Dick!
DeleteI just learned something new guys....one more tip for the list. The first paragraph after a section break is also NOT indented. At least it's true for the Gilly Salt Sisters, a traditional pub book I'm reading right now. And in Fifty Shades of Grey--which I'm trying not to read right now--lol!
ReplyDeleteBut it's not true for "Speaker for the Dead" by Orson Scott Card, which my son is reading right now. So maybe this one is by preference.
Thanks for all the great information. I'm in the process of writing my first non-fiction book, and I certainly appreciate your information on formatting.
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